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Friday, June 28, 2019

Comic Books!

Kia Ora!
Welcome Back!

This week is going to be another School Journal blog post. A few weeks ago I did a blog titled "My Cheeks Look Like Cherries" and that was a book from the school journal I had don't last week. This week we have been starting a brand new school jornal and I have decided to share my favorite story in the book so far.

This book is about a famous comic book writer.
Do you like comics? Do you have a favorite one? 
This book has the process he took to become a comic book artist and writer and  how he comes up with the ideas and the process to finalize the comic book/books.

This is my version of a summary for this book to give you a better idea on what its about.
Summary.

This is about the journey hard work of creating a masterpiece.
Comics. 
All of the time and dedication this cartoon artist has worked for to create and
share all of his amazing work, and it all started out with a dream. This takes us
through step by spet what happens when someone goes into the lab and comes out

with a new comic book.” take your work seriously”

“ Get your work out there”.



These school journals help me with my learning in many ways, first they help my understand the text and to prove that I do I have to answer questions, write a summary and complete tasks about the book.
It also improves my Vocabulary by me finding 5 new words in the books finding out the meanings and then writing a good sentence using that word. We also have to make our slides creative and fun.

Here is my activities.


1) His Process of making a comic.
First: He works in his notebook always having new ideas until on of the books

“ Takes over” and then he focus of that one book.
Next: he panels and plans creating the panel sizes and working in speech bubbles.
After that: he works on the first draft with the panel sizes drawing and writing to make

it look like  book, he does this to make any changes,
Soon after: He makes a well thought out final inks with no color.


Finally: He colours in the picture and publishers




2) 
My Comic.
3) 
His Timeline.

Thanks for watching and looking at my blog. I hope you enjoyed some of the work that I have been working on at school and I cant wait to see and read your amazing comment and I hope you continue to come on my blog and if you guys think that there is something that I can improve on I would love to hear it so I can improve my work! Thanks!
-Maddie

Wednesday, June 26, 2019

What's The Question?????

Kia Ora!
Welcome back to my blog and I really hope you enjoy my blog post, this is about the number 44. The number 44 is the answer to a question but they don't tell us witch but the answer does not have to be maths so after thinking for a while and discussing it with my dad we decided the question. Continue watching to find out! But another challenging thing is that once you find out the  question you need to share it in an exciting way, this I found challenging because how do you share a simple answer or question, again continue to watch to find out how I did it ( it has something to do with cake ).

If you could choses the question that the answer was 44 what would it be?


Thanks again for watching my blog post and I really hope you enjoyed, I can't wait to see and read your amazing comments I will be sure to reply, Please add in feedback because I love to try to make my work better and improve my learning skills and all of your feedback helps! What was your favorite part? What do I need to work on? Thanks and let me know these answers in the comments!

Thanks again!
Maddison.
-Proud student from YMS.

The Green Leaves Look Like Ripe Limes In Summer.

Kia Ora!
Welcome!

This weeks blog post is about.... TREES! I know a little bit different but still intriguing.
The student council took charge for our learning for a bit instead of the teachers ( I think that's pretty cool ) they talked to us about you guessed it trees, we all had to wright a few poems about a tree that we had taken a photo of, once we took the photos of them we had to types of poems we had to right a haiku or 3 sentence poems, we all did so and the result was amazing.

The student council chose this activity because of what they had learnt and because we were donated 150 trees to the school, we all planted about 2 each we were paired with a younger child to create a bond whilst planting trees in the school.

My favorite part was probably the fact that we all did it with younger children and got to speak with them which we don't usually do.


I wrote two poems this was my favorite....

"The winter weather wacks the trees.
Pressuring the sun colored leaves
To fall down to the cold hard ground,"

This was the tree I based my poem of.....


Thanks to you all for coming onto my blog and reading my blog post about trees and I hope you all appreciate the beauty of trees as much as we do at YMS and I can't wait to see the progress of the trees as they grow big and tall. Thanks again for coming onto my blog!!!
Have a fun pact day!
-Maddie.


Friday, June 21, 2019

My Cheeks Look Like Cherries

Kia Ora! Welcome back to my  learning blog!

This week I will be sharing one of my stories from my old school journal we have stated a new one this week.
This story or poem is called Embarrassment Expert, it is about how to control your embarrassment using metaphors such as saying your a tree. ( weird but it sounds amazing )
First I had to write a summary of the story and 5 new word,meaning and write sentences using the new worlds. Then I had to answer the questions and make a piece of artwork to do with the story.
My favorite part was when they all use different powerful words and things like personification and metaphors to give the best description
We have these activities to match our reading and writing goals to see if we can be creative and understand all of text.
What is my goal? For writing I need to use more emotive and wonderful words, I think that this has helped me improve this by making make more powerful sentences because when I look at my old sentences and my sentences now there is a huge difference and this is one of the things that has helped me in that.
Reading goals: Identify the writers language for effect. To put that in human it means I need to find out how the writer uses language to make their writing better. I think this has helped me in that way with reading all of the text and writing a summary to make sure that I understand everything.
Please enjoy!




"Everybody Hates Humiliation But Karaoke Still Exists"






I hope you all enjoyed and I really hope to read all of your amazing comments leave some feedback for me to work on and what is a new word that you have learnt? 
Have a SUPER day!
-Blogger out!

Wednesday, June 19, 2019

Wondering about wonder wondering about blogging about wonder?!?!?!

Kia Ora!
Its me Maddie back again with another blog post!
Today I am sharing with you my review on my wonder work and my book cover that I have made to do with wonder, next blog will most likely be most of my wonder work ( yes theres a difference ) this is just the review on what I think about the book some quotes from the book etc this is also known as a.... DLO if you haven't noticed I have done multiply DLOS on my blog ( keep an eye out for more dlo's in the future)
Have you ever read or seen the movie of wonder? I have finished reading the book for wonder and making sure to understand the text we are currently watching the movie taking out pieces from the movie and comparing them to the book, Tell me a bit about the movie in the comments( no spoilers ) I like both for different reasons, if you have seen both the movie and the read the book which one did you like more? Why?
My favourite part of the book is when Jack and August finally get over what happened in the fight, I think that shows the true power of friendship. How about you?
P.s. if I look funny in some of the photos it is because it is wig day!!

Enjoy!





Thanks so so much for watching this blog please leave a comment down below about what I can improve on what you liked and please answer some of the questions I have asked I would love to read your point of view on things. Maybe we could compare our thoughts and feelings?

Thanks again and I can't wait to read your comments!
-Maddie.

Tuesday, June 18, 2019

Sun gone + moon gone = grass gone animals gone.....Humans gone?!?!?!

Kia ora!
Welcome back to my blog!
This is another learning blog post!
Today is about what I think would happen if the eclipse disappeared if you don't know the eclipse is the sun and the moon when they cross paths so if there wasn't one there would be know sun or moon! Soon after we will have to ask our family members or friends, just letting you know that I have presented this on biteable and they don't give you much room to type so just letting you know that my answers are spread out a little bit.
-Enjoy!








No sun Or moon on Biteable.

Thanks for watching and I ope you continue to visit my blog, next blog post will be Wednesday, Friday and next week for home learning blog! Please leave a Positive Thoughtful, Helpful comment and I will be sure to reply! I really hope you enjoyed my biteable and if you have feedback for me please add it into your comment! Thanks.
-Maddie.

Wednesday, June 12, 2019

* Whines in pain* OWWWWW You Caught My Eye LET IT GO!!

Kia Ora welcome back!!!!

This is going to be a little bit of a different blog post in a way. Why? Because im going to give you all a tip or two about your blog ( if you have one ) so at class on monday ( 10/6/19 ) we all went to go look at blogs and place screenshots of the blog post that caught our eyes. We labeled them and then some of us shared our slides to the class, majority of us put some of the same blog posts in because of how good they were so im here today to share with how to make your blogs more eye catching so basically making a blog post about blogs!

I have created a slide about the blogs that I liked and then a google drawing of the parts I like. Aka the tips.
If you guys spot some of your blogs in here let me know by leaving a Positive , Thoughtful , Helpful comment! Enjoy!





This is all of the things that I found make a blog post eye catching if you do uses some of these ideas please link your blog in the comments and I will be sure to stop by and look at the blog that you posted with one of my tips!

These are all of the blogs that I enjoyed and found eye catching. Is yours in there???




Thanks for watching and I would be super glad to see what all of you thought and the feedback you could right in the comments and I will be sure to reply to you all!! Have a great day and I hope you enjoyed my blog post!

Wednesday, June 5, 2019

Feature Of A Non Chronological Order

Kia Ora!
Welcome!

Today we were learning about Features Of A Non Chronological Order Reports.
The example was a factual report on....  WEREWOLVES.
We all had to highlight what we thought was some of the mail features about the report.
Next we had to find our personal workbook and start creating a poster to share our work so far. I have decided to share the quick poster I made with you all. I hope you like it!


Thanks for watching and I hope that you enjoyed! If there is anything that I can do to improve or if I missed any of the features please the a positive thoughtful helpful comment and I will be sure to read and reply. Can't Wait!