I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora I am Maya from Grey Main School I saw your great story I loved it you put so much detail. was it made up because I have never heard or seen a story like that one day at my school I hope I get to do that. By Maya
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Kia Ora I am Maya from Grey Main School I saw your great story I loved it you put so much detail. was it made up because I have never heard or seen a story like that one day at my school I hope I get to do that.
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Hi Maya it was made up We had to pick to thing and combined them. And thank you four amazing comment
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