Kia Ora and Welcome to my blog!
Every tuesday the lovely Miss Morgan come into our classroom after last break to teach us all about cybersmart and the huge wide web around us!
I worked in a group with Dion and Albin cheek out their blogs to find out more.
We had to watch a few videos about each area of the slides to understand exactly what we are going to do.
The past two weeks we have been working through a Google Slide all about how to address what a comment has and how we can improve it. There was an image of a comment on someone's blog and we got the amazing job to locate what that comment had and what it can improve on.
This was our favorite comment we did together
Because it is a little hard to read here is what the comment says.
Kia Ora Tevini, We are Albin, Maddie and Dion from Yaldhurst Model School.
You're facts about him are very interesting I really liked how you put in that black panther was the first black character in mainstream comics.
We haven't seen the movie but it sounds super cool and if we get a chance we would definitely check it out sometime.
Maybe next time you could re read and make sure to add in capital letters and full stops but this was still a super cool blog post!
What sparked your interest in black panther? When did you first watch the movie?
Thanks!
-Maddie, Dion and Albin from Yaldhurst
Reflection!
I think that this is going to help me alot with improving my future blog commenting that the entire Rimu class does very week. I think that this would help me now because I know what makes a comment good and what I would need to improve on. It has also given be ideas on what a good blog comment looks and sounds like. I enjoyed this activity although it didn't teach me much but it did make me understand more.
Thank You all so much for coming onto my blog please come back on here again and I would love to see all of your wonderful comments.
Do you like blog commenting?
What's something I could improve on?
What does a quality comment mean to you ?
-Maddie
Hi maddie it your post police buddy Briar. Lets start of with something helpful well I don't really know because your blog is amazing but something that you need to work on is nothing
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