I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
The past few weeks in Rimu we have been learning about newspaper reports, we are all going to turn our newspaper reports into a real newspaper and we are going to read them in silent reading. silent reading is when we all bring a book from home, from the library or class bookshelf the class spends 20 minutes reading their books, this time happens after lunch.
My newspaper report is called " school of couch potatoes have a new member ".
Can you please give me some feedback like how it looks and if it connects or not, and if it is in the third person, Thank You.
School Of Couch Potatoes Have A New Member
On Wednesday 8th of January a giant potato
was found at Yaldhurst Model School.
This was very unexpected and none of the
students nor teachers had any idea of what happened.
The school said that it was a very panic situation and was very
scary because many
of are students were outside at the at the time
.they also said that “ this memory will stick to us forever “.
Some of the student that saw the incident
happen were Maddison Leslie, Mia Yee,
Abby Steele, Nikita Kalanins.
The potato was 28 ft long and 12ft wide
and it was three times the size of the students some four.
On the day of when it happens we had
talked to some of the students, Maddison
Leslie said “I was the biggest thing she
had seen and was like she had been imagining it ".
Nikita kalnins said that she was outside at the
time filming a video for the school and that she
dropped the ipad that she was filming with and
ran she said that “ it would that the biggest oven to
bake this big potato “. Abby Steele watches from
the classroom she screamed because she knew
that some of her friends were outside and she
immediately and then ran to the lowest point in
the school just to be sure she wouldn't get hurt “
it was like a dream it all happened so fast “.
Worlds Biggest Potato
Some of the teachers told the kids to
evacuate others burst out laughing,
Angla Taylor said that she wanted to
keep the kids in her class safe and she
told them all to follow Abby Steele, Mr.
Robistion ( who is also the principle )
and Mr. Mathews burst out laughing for about
two or three minutes.
Mr robistion soon after went to help the students
in his school and making sure no one was hurt at the time.
Mr Robstion and all of the other teachers there agre
ed that soon a carrot then a tomato then some lettuce
will fallon and the will work together to make a giant
stuff fry and end world hunger but that is a story for another day.
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In my maths groupe we have been doing some different types of maths this is a picture of my working out.
The question is: Adam bought a watch for 50c. Unfortunately it gains 30 minutes each day! If Adam stets his watch at noon one day, how long would it take before it shows 12 o clock again?
I made a calendar and wrote the days down and the times then when it landed on 12:00 I got the answer but I want to see how you do it
you had to figure out when adams wach will go back to noon my tip is to make a calendar with a table on google slides and try, I got thursday you should give it a go and comment what you got as your answer. I would love to hear what you got
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