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Thursday, May 4, 2017

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  1. Hi Maddison, I am Telesia from St. Bernadette's.
    I liked that you chose to do a google slide to present your story about going to the library. Could you reread your work and correct your punctuation and grammar? Next time, you could think about adding pictures or diagrams to show the events of the library.

    I'm excited to read your next story

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    1. my next story will be done in a few days

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