Hey guys Its me Maddie, I have been doing alot of free writing lately. I have started a new one which is about half way done and this one that I am sharing with you is my favorite and the one I have finished. I really like this free writing because I think that I gave a lot of description and an overall good job. What do you think? I decided to make mine a thriller because I was in the spooky mood and it was the only good idea that came to mind and I liked. What is your favorite try of story?
This story I found really hard to come up for illustrations, but the easy part was the writing because I had so many ideas.
Thank you so much for reading my blog post, What was your favorite part? What can I improve on? What are some ideas I can writ about next time?.
Sincerely, Maddie
Thursday, March 14, 2019
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Hey Maddison, Great writing it's really good the details and storytelling are captivating and the added pictures give it more detail. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteRegards - King from Pt England School
Hello King,
DeleteThanks you so much for coming onto my blog! I am really glad you enjoyed it, what was your favorite part? do you have a favorite book? Let me know my favorite book is 300 minutes of danger it's about a group of kids that have 30 minutes to escape there dange. Have you heard of it?
Kind Regards, Maddie.