I Know You're Awake

Kia Ora Readers!
First of all I really appreciate all of you coming onto my blog and reading my post. I hope you enjoy it!

In my Writing group we are writing a free write and I was really proud of it and would love to share it with all of you. I found it challenging thought to create pictures to go along with text I have written, I had idea of what to make, I could see it in my head but it is really hard to create and put into a picture when it looks so good and to detailed in your mind.
My favourite part was getting my ideas down, I always have little ideas for stories and sometimes I don't get time to do create them. That's why I love free writing because I can create my stories that I have had ideas for.
I think that I could improve on some of the description I feel like somethings that I have so many ideas and want to get them all down but im scared im not going to have enough time so I try to rush it a little so next time I want to try and fix that problem. I also think that I made some very simple images and I want to create them better and make them more creative, I had an idea to make a child ( the main character ) under a blanket hiding and I had the idea but I couldn't find a way to put that onto  a slide in my own way aka without coping.

I derided to write a thriller, I had this idea for a while ever since I fond another thriller story and based it of that.

Here It is!







Thank you all for coming onto my blog I really hope you enjoyed it, I enjoyed making it very much and can't wait to make my next free write. What an I improve on ? Thanks!

Maddie.