Pages

Friday, June 21, 2019

My Cheeks Look Like Cherries

Kia Ora! Welcome back to my  learning blog!

This week I will be sharing one of my stories from my old school journal we have stated a new one this week.
This story or poem is called Embarrassment Expert, it is about how to control your embarrassment using metaphors such as saying your a tree. ( weird but it sounds amazing )
First I had to write a summary of the story and 5 new word,meaning and write sentences using the new worlds. Then I had to answer the questions and make a piece of artwork to do with the story.
My favorite part was when they all use different powerful words and things like personification and metaphors to give the best description
We have these activities to match our reading and writing goals to see if we can be creative and understand all of text.
What is my goal? For writing I need to use more emotive and wonderful words, I think that this has helped me improve this by making make more powerful sentences because when I look at my old sentences and my sentences now there is a huge difference and this is one of the things that has helped me in that.
Reading goals: Identify the writers language for effect. To put that in human it means I need to find out how the writer uses language to make their writing better. I think this has helped me in that way with reading all of the text and writing a summary to make sure that I understand everything.
Please enjoy!




"Everybody Hates Humiliation But Karaoke Still Exists"






I hope you all enjoyed and I really hope to read all of your amazing comments leave some feedback for me to work on and what is a new word that you have learnt? 
Have a SUPER day!
-Blogger out!

No comments:

Post a Comment

Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.