Spy Fox

Kia Ora!

Welcome!

I am so beyond excited to share with you all today some of my new work. In class we always do a long write on Tuesday, This week though we are going to start doing it on a wednesday. The teachers always show us some type of video to help us write our story. We have some super cool examples for us to choose from and I will show you here

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 I  have chosen a non chronological report.  because I haven't done a piece of writing like that for a long time and I think that I nailed it. I am really proud of it because I was always really fond of these pieces of wiring and I loved to share my own with you.

We had to do our work on spy fox. Here is a link to the video we watched.

He is a spy that has to save Lily from hammerhead. ( he is a shark ).

I really enjoyed creating this because I think that it is a good way to share some work and get feedback for my next piece of writing. I will always have your feedback in mind.

I found it challenging to remember every part of this type of writing because I haven't  written a piece like this in awhile.

Enjoy!

Thank You all so much for coming onto my blog!

I really hope you can give me some feedback on my writing in the comments. DIdi you watch the video? What did you think ? What one of the options would you have chosen to write about?

Please come back to my blog again!