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Wednesday, November 6, 2019

The Shadow

Kia Ora WELCOME!


What is this blog going to be like today?
Well today I am excited to share with you one a small short story that I have created.
I am excited to share this with you because I think that it sounds really good and has a rhythm to the story.

I really think that it is a good piece of writing but before I try and make it into a full story I thought I might get some of your feedback.

I wrote this today after I had finished a math test. I think that it is one of my most different pieces of writing I have created. Why? I think this because my pieces of writing are usually horror and scary or something like a moment in time where im describing something that has happened to me or where I am

I have created a small black and white colored themed slide ( to match the text ). I would call this piece of writing more of a prototype for the really thing if you don't know what that is it is a real life plan of a project. I think that when I go more in depth of some of the parts it will be really good. What do you think?


My favorite part. I really enjoyed creating the story and the slide theme as well. I really like how the prototype of my story came out.
I found it challenging to only add in the key points and then improve it from there.
One more thing because I show you my story I would really like to add in some pictures or illustrations and i'm not sure what. What are some of your ideas?






Thank you all so much for coming onto my blog!
I really hope that you all come back here again and I hope you liked my writing.
As I have mentioned a lot in this blog post It would mean the world to me is you wrote some feedback to create my finish product better.
-Kindest regards.
Maddie


1 comment:

  1. kia ora my name is jamie l like the way you did the black on the white

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