Kia Ora! Welcome back to my blog thank you all so much for coming onto my blog I hope you all leave an amazing comment and I will get back to you as soon as I can.
I hope you all had a good anzac day! What was some of the things you got up to share them with me in the comments.
because of anzac day me and my class have all been given some interesting anzac day work! so I thought it would be a good idea to share it with u!
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Friday, May 1, 2020
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Kia ora Maddie,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your learning about why we have poppies on Anzac Day. You seem to have done some research in order to write up the details on this slide. I didn't know that the seeds spread and grow easily. I guess they are kinda like a wild flower.
Something that could improve your blog is making sure that you use capital letters at the start of each sentence. What would Mrs Taylor say Maddie?? ;)
Love the picture and the colour for the background. Keep up the great blogging!
:) Mrs Spragg
Thank you so much for coming onto my blog Mrs Spragg and leaving your wonderful comment.
DeleteYes noted I will double check to make sure that there are capitals at the start of my sentence, :).
Thanks again!
Hello Maddie, it's me, your editing buddy!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have some pictures of poppies and lots of information about why they show remembrance.
This reminds me of when I did this activity, I didn't know you did it too.
To improve, maybe you could check the formatting of the writing because its not in quite the right place.
Do you celebrate Anzac Day?
I do sometimes.
Cya later Maddie, keep it up!
-Amelia
Hey there amelia!
DeleteThank you so much for coming onto my blog and leaving this amazing comment im being grateful for you amazing feedback and I will look put for that in my next post.
No I didn't celebrate anzac day this year but i did make some art did you?
Thanks again
Kia Ora Maddie,
ReplyDeleteIts Grace your best friend,
WOW!
What an amazing blog post, this is very good
You explain how they grow and why and as well the visuals are very good.
I did something like this for my writing activity but it wasn't this good,
But I don't think there is anything wrong apart from maybe check your spelling before you post it (We all make these mistakes)
Apart from that this is amazing
- Grace
Heyy Gracie : )
DeleteThank you so much for your positive and helpful feedback they were all so kind and I think that would be a good way to improve that you for reminding me :D
Thank you again!