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Thursday, April 23, 2020

Sharing My Long Write

Kia Ora and welcome back to another one of my blogs. I hope you are all staying safe and staying home. Today's blog post will be about one of my long write I do every day for my online distance learning. We write about an image that has also inspired some other newspaper articles.
Here are some questions I have answered in my story Would you have liked to have attended a kindergarten like this? How do you think it might have changed you? Do you suffer from a lack of nature in your life now?
You could have a go answering some of those questions in the comments. :)





I think that one thing I want to improve on is maybe making my google slides more interesting is there anything else you can think of that I can improve on? Let me know!


Thank you all so much for coming onto my blog I would love to see you all here again and I would love to read all of your amazing comments down below!
-Maddie

2 comments:

  1. HI Maddie
    I was looking forward to reading your long write but cannot find a link for it, and I have my glasses on!
    Help!
    Ms L

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  2. Konnichiwa Maddie, its me, your editing buddy!

    I liked the way your writing was... wait... where is your writing? 😕

    This reminds me of a time this happened to Olivia B. I tried to help her get the slide to show up but it just wouldn't.

    To improve, maybe you could preview your blogs before you post to prevent things like this from happening.

    Has this happened to you before?

    Cya later, keep it up!

    -Amelia 🦊

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