My Newspaper Report

The past few weeks in Rimu we have been learning about newspaper reports, we are all going to turn our newspaper reports into a real newspaper and we are going to read them in silent reading. silent reading is when we all bring a book from home, from the library or class bookshelf the class spends 20 minutes reading their books, this time happens after lunch.
My newspaper report is called " school of couch potatoes have a new member ".
Can you please give me some feedback like how it looks and if it connects or not, and if it is in the third person, Thank You.

-Maddison

Maddies News

School Of Couch Potatoes Have A New Member

On Wednesday 8th of January a giant potato

was found at Yaldhurst Model School.

This was very unexpected and none of the

students nor teachers had any idea of what happened.

The school said that it was a very panic situation and was very

scary because many

of are students were outside at the at the time

.they also said that “ this memory will stick to us forever “.

Some of the student that saw the incident

happen were Maddison Leslie, Mia Yee,

Abby Steele, Nikita Kalanins.

The potato was 28 ft long and 12ft wide

and it was three times the size of the students some four.

On the day of when it happens we had

talked to some of the students, Maddison

Leslie said “I was the biggest thing she

had seen and was like she had been imagining it ".

Nikita kalnins said that she was outside at the

time filming a video for the school and that she

dropped the ipad that she was filming with and

ran she said that “ it would that the biggest oven to

bake this big potato “. Abby Steele  watches from

the classroom she screamed because she knew

that some of her friends were outside and she

immediately and then ran to the lowest point in

the school just to be sure she wouldn't get hurt “

it was like a dream it all happened so fast “.

Worlds Biggest Potato

Some of the teachers told the kids to

evacuate others burst out laughing,

Angla Taylor said that she wanted to

keep the kids in her class safe and she

told them all to follow Abby Steele, Mr.

Robistion  ( who is also the principle )

and Mr. Mathews burst out laughing for about

two or three minutes.

Mr robistion soon after went to help the students

in his school and making sure no one was hurt at the time.

Mr Robstion and all of the other teachers there agre

ed that soon a carrot then a tomato then some lettuce will fallon and the will work together to make a giant

stuff fry and end world hunger but that is a story for another day.

Thank you for reading my blog post and please leave some feed back thank you again

-Maddison