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Wednesday, May 8, 2019

Pink Blue Or Purple.

Kia Ora Fellow Bloggers!
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In my writing groupe we have been learning about description focusing on similes and metaphors.

Here's a cheesy song. CHEESY SONG  incase you want to know more about them. ( my teacher loves cheesy songs. )

Okay so we all have a workbook and we need to complete the activities on it this is the first one and this is the one that I want to share with you. So first we needed to decide witch out of the tree were better and why and what key things dose it have and we all wrote that down.




Sample 1My bedroom is at the end of the hallway. When you walk into my room it is a big open space with cream/white coloured walls. I have a window seat looking out onto the street where I love to sit and read. It’s decorated with pillows and a big blanket. I have a queen size bed also decorated with pillows and blankets. My bedroom has a desk to do homework, a dresser for my clothes, a bookshelf and a nightstand beside my bed. Aside from the furniture in my room, I have two comfy areas where I just relax.



My Thoughts about the blue.

I think that it is a little bit boring but it still very factual and gets state to the point .I think that it could use some different sentence starters.It uses placement in the writing to describe where it is and sometimes the colours.

Sample 2
My bedroom is a four-walled space, painted blue/turquoise on the bottom and grey on the top with a white trim in the middle dividing the two colours. In one of the corners of my room is my queen size bed with grey sheets and a white comforter that has dots of blue/turquoise and coral on it. Right in front of my bed is a white dresser with a TV on it . In the corner diagonal from my bed is a grey chair. On the wall to the right of the chair is my closet, then my mirror is in the last corner. Beside the mirror is a white door with a silver handle. The last thing in my room is a small dresser beside my bed.


My thoughts about purple.

I think that the purple has some description with the colours and still uses those placements. I think that they have used many different things in their writing but is still very factual but is still a little vague and some boring.It also uses description on how things looks. I also think that it gives you a picture like all of them do but not a very one of a kind picture.

Sample 3
My bedroom is a safety net with swirling colours hugging the walls. In one of the corners of my room my queen size bed sits, waiting for the weight of my body at the end of the day. Right in front of my bed is a delicate white dresser that holds all my secrets. Diagonal from the bed standing to attention is my chair.On the wall to the right of the chair is the object that stares back at me looking for my successes and my failures.Beside it is a curved, small, snow coloured door with a sparkling silver handle. This is my sanctuary. This is my haven. This is my safe place.


My thoughts about pink


I think that the pink has used many things and lots of descriptions such as ISPACE. Sets Of Threes. Alliteration. It has used many different things with their words to describe how things looks to give a better picture in you head.

Overall Thoughts.
Overall I think that the pink is the best because of the picture you get in your head the similes,metaphor,personification to give you the best dealt.



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-Maddie

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